Sunday, November 17, 2013

Blood.....



Drop by drop

The words flow out, STOP

Don't leave me!

7 comments:

  1. Love your haiku expressing such powerful emotional imagery without using the word blood itself!

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  2. Ow, powerful and emotional. Very well done!

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  3. Love for words expressed nicely! Good one!

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  4. so few words expressing so much........amazing

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  5. "don't leave me"
    without you my heart
    is drained dry

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  6. The won't leave you unless you pen them down somewhere. But, personally speaking, I cannot always stop words from escaping my thoughts and getting sucked into the void outside.

    Good haiku. :)

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